wii age 21 charlie

The worst book I ever read is probably Across Five Aprils. It is about a sixteen year old that fights for the Union even though he was a Confederate. I ...

Nice describing. The only problem I saw was you spelled harbor wrong. You should of spelled it harbor, but you spelled it "harbour. I have always wanted to know when ...

Nice Writing. You described very well. The only problems I saw was that you wrote "Thank god the scorpion picked on me and spared my children." and you need to ...

I don't really like twilight that much, but you do describe everything very well. :) "the purr of a porsche enginge" Enginge is spelled engine and instead of purr it ...

Your doing really good for English 101. My mind wanders when I am writing, but sometimes it makes for good stories. "Experianced" is spelled experience. I start writing the same ...

Nice Rhyming. The problems I saw was that you didn't put periods at the ends of the sentences ,and this part doesn't really go together very good"They heard us into ...

you were much better at describing than me. the only Problem I saw was that when you wrote "neighbours" you spelled it wrong. The right way to spell it is ...

You were very detailed. You described everything much better than I could. You had good grammar. The only problems I saw was "your command console will began to play" instead ...